Salvia

Hello, baby. How is
life treating you?
Buzzing bee,

is life a kind of flu
since you flew
away from me?

Tell me true—
are you blue,
are you blue

like me?

 

 

 

Please visit Open Link Light at dVerse Poets.

Advertisements
Standard

20 thoughts on “Salvia

  1. Love its simplicity and rhetoric. Kind of saying “I secretly hope you’re as sad as me.”
    Playful sound like a song. I like those. smiles.

  2. ..ah, i really really like this for its simplicity yet evoking such a deep sad undertone that cleverly camouflaged with the intentional rhyming scheeme… loved it… smiles…

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s