Betrayal Crow on fencepost flaps, becomes black garbage bag. Hey, it’s Open Link Night at dVerse Poets! Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related Standard
15 thoughts on “Betrayal”
I can picture the garbage bag filling with air and flying off. Nice word painting!
Thanks, Colleen! This was a quick moment that happened on a recent car trip. Thought I was looking at a lovely nature scene, and then … oops.
I’m sorry. I’m missing something.>KB
Fair enough …
An awesome write !
Bravo! This is succinct, strong and perfect.
Thanks so much, Beth! I had to fight to keep it succinct. I really wanted to explain that I was looking out the window of a car, my eye deceived me, etc., etc., but I liked it better as a quick flash, just like the original image was.
Smiles. I dislike crows (they are bullies), but bin bags are useful!
says it and it’s said…love it !!
That was – unexpected … lol nice 🙂