About a Breakable World, for Open Link Night

Geode

It breaks to reveal
a whole other world

peopled by ants,
anted by people.

There are waves
and thunder,
leaves and wind.

This is not
what you expected.

Pay for it;
take it home.

This belongs to you now.
Wish you could crawl inside.

 

 

For Open Link Night at dVerse Poets.

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6 thoughts on “About a Breakable World, for Open Link Night

  1. its rather magical inside a geode…i might not mind a visit…then again you would be surprised what you might find when you look inside most any thing…smiles…

  2. I really enjoyed the innocent wonder in this, turning some great phrases as you express that wonder. Great image at the end, as it reflects what I myself feel in the presence of these objects.

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