NaPoWriMo, Day 1 (Catching Up): A Triolet

Poetic forms often scare me, but this was fun as a mental exercise, if nothing else. Also, you might think I’m now all caught up, but that sneaky NaPoWriMo lady gave a prompt right before things kicked off. So I’ll eventually post my effort for Day Zero (which sounds a little ominous).

Violet Triolet

What can I tell you about the violet?
It might grow wild, all over your yard.
I pick up the phone, begin to dial it;
what can I tell you about the violet?
Some people pot it and try to style it,
but those people are trying too hard.
What can I tell you about the violet?
It might grow wild, all over your yard.

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NaPoWriMo Day 12: Phonetic Translation of a Foreign Poem

Rakish Diatom
(after All People are Pregnant, said Diatoma, by Hasso Krull)

Cook immense on raised Dad, rakish diatom.
Raise on end keyhole, yeah, raise on end hinge,
or could not koi guest vast to have at sunny day.
Eye Lou on sunny to mine. Sun on gee I lose.

Knee rakish diatom Socrates Ella. Socrates rakish
same jut to agar Tony peel, sedum coulis
nor Aristodemos, yeah, rakish hill gem at a sea
Apollo door oh say la, kiss rakish Oma super daily.

Wake Plato manga west porno cat egg, yeah.
Cost tool vat cook need porny cad, mottles Dad,
cash achy you west has to sure rest porno cast
you level Tevas? Can Dad may or nay?

Oh tucks Olie um Dad to pay magma Vi nude.
Agar Tony you rest algas pay day day pee do.
yeah, eat key gee hey Jack sand a name you are, hey catty, are you to me:
ragtime tonight arm a too zest. Ragtime I lost.

OK, here’s the original:

Kõik inimesed on rasedad, rääkis Diotima,
rase on nende keha, ja rase on nende hing,
oi kuidas nad kõigest väest tahavad sünnitada.
Ilu on sünnitamine. Sünd ongi ilus.

Nii rääkis Diotima Sokratesele. Sokrates rääkis
sama juttu Agathoni peol, seda kuulis
noor Aristodemos, ja rääkis hiljem edasi
Apollodorosele, kes rääkis oma sõpradele.

Väike Platon mängis õues põrnikatega.
Kust tulevad kõik need põrnikad, mõtles ta,
kas äkki ühest hästi suurest põrnikast
üleval taevas? Keda meie ei näe?

Õhtuks oli emme ta tuppa magama viinud.
Agathoni juures algas pedede pidu,
ja et keegi ei jaksand enam juua, hakati arutama:
räägime täna armastusest. Räägime ilust

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NaPoWriMo, Days 11 and 3 (Five Senses, and a Wedding)

Day 11: A Five Senses Poem

Wednesday Morning

Cool, smooth hand in mine;
how is it that she is still
so little, when her world
gets bigger every day,
and her personality is
as huge as the sun?

At our front door we see
a big, orange box that holds
a double stroller for our
upstairs neighbors, two
women who are about to be
two moms for two babies,
one boy and one girl.

In my left ear, I hear
my one little girl prattle
in her customary way
about how maybe she
can baby-sit these twins
once she’s 10 or 11, or
in her “late teens.”

We cross the busy street,
stop to sniff an early lilac
fooled by the good weather
last month; now its scent
is tamped down by the cold.

My mouth holds a hint
of coffee, masked by
Colgate’s finest; this is
the taste of a school day
when I drop her off
on the playground so
she can walk through
a big door, into a life
other than my own.

Day 3: A Wedding

Hydrangea

You are not my favorite flower.
I am about native plants, fragrance,
pollinators. You are fussy, foreign,
have no scent. And yet you are

a wedding as giddy as any I’ve ever
been to, enormous heads of pink and blue
on one plant, as long as there is, around
your roots, a marriage of acid soil and basic.

You unite the earth. You express it in color.
Pink blooms and blue, your salute to summer
and, I suppose, to love—I know my eyes
love you in spite of the rest of me.

Sometimes, too, you bloom in purple.
Then I think the earth around you is so
mixed, it can no longer be separated;
the two have become one flesh. Yours.

 

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NaPoWriMo, Day 4 (Catching Up): A Poem in the Form of a Blues Song

I was dreading this one because rhyme and form are not usually my friends. But I actually had fun with it, trying to fit within the form but also say something real about my son and how we relate to each other.

The Mother-Son Blues

Oh, I have a little three-year-old boy
I say, I have a little three-year-old boy
And he brings me nothing but pain and joy

My boy, he likes to burp out loud
Yes, my boy, he likes to burp out loud
But when I scold, it just makes him proud

He acts a fool whenever I’m looking
Oh, he acts a fool whenever I’m looking
Then he gives me a hug, says I’m his cookie

Sometimes I don’t know which end is up
Oh, sometimes I don’t know which end is up
Is he a demon from hell or a cute little pup?

All his jokes are about tinkle and poop
Yes, all his jokes are about tinkle and poop
Sometimes I laugh, then I have to regroup

He makes me laugh, he makes me cry
Oh, he makes me laugh, he makes me cry
And I’ll be his cookie til the day I die

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NaPoWriMo Day 5 (Catching Up): For Baseball’s Opening Day

Seventh-Inning Stretch

My mother was a Yankees fan,
had a jersey and everything;
she wore it with Keds and little
socks that didn’t match at all.

I don’t know anything about
this game, only that it made her
happy to root for someone.
In my mind, I can see the logo:

the bat, the hat, stars and stripes.
I can see her, too, if I really try, but
the image gets hazier with each
new year. I swore it never would.

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NaPoWriMo Day 10: Borrow (or Steal) a First Line

With many, many thanks to complynn, who told us all about “Enter SHIFT” for returns within stanzas (and thereby stopped my growling).

Cousin Fergus

(after Who Goes With Fergus? by William Butler Yeats)

Who will go drive with Fergus now?
That’s what I’d like to know about it.

I could ask him, but he’s always
half in the bag, and the stench

knocks you back a ways. He lives
down at the end of that crooked

road, in a split-level he stole from
his aunt. He has filled it with his

leavings, the odd little dolls he
whittles, tries to give away to

children, whose sensible mothers
pull them closer, keep their hands

from reaching, reaching toward
Fergus, his dolls, his beseechings.

Who will go drive with Fergus now?
All he has left is a motor scooter,

and it can’t climb hills very well.
There are things he needs, and

I suppose I’ll drive him, though
his aunt was my own mother,

and every time I see that stolen
house, it splits my heart in two.

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