“Never forget me,”
she said, but memory fades
quicker than spice.
For NaPoWriMo, Day 4. The prompt was to write a lune, a form that has three lines with three, five, and three words in each.
“Never forget me,”
she said, but memory fades
quicker than spice.
For NaPoWriMo, Day 4. The prompt was to write a lune, a form that has three lines with three, five, and three words in each.
Marilyn Rauch Cavicchia 
i think
she said …
That’s another intriguing start to a poem …
Nice!
This lune form is a new one to me. Your poem really makes me want to try it out. (Still figuring out whether/how to do NaPoWriMo over here.)
Thanks! Are you wondering because of the whole “previously published” thing?