I roll around the world,
the lonely round world,
and I sing in a different key.
I jolt awake and see that
I’ve been skating all night,
trying to reach your door.
My bicycle rides without me
sometimes. You’ll find it
under your window
one morning, when I am
least myself, and most,
when I am not driving,
but walking, not singing,
only talking—
talking to myself
about you, or how
everyone says
I’m doing all right,
for a girl.
If it’s Tuesday p.m., check out Open Link Night at dVerse Poets. Also, I’ve started a month-long series in which I’ll write a poem based on a different song each day. (Here’s the one that inspired today’s poem.) If you have a request (any style, any song, any artist), please let me know in the comments. Thanks!
Wonderful. I’m old enough to remember, as they say. You’re doing alright, indeed!
Thanks, Ray! I always thought this was a light, happy song, but she actually sounds so lonely. These suggestions are helping me hear familiar songs differently.
Nice work! I like the idea of writing a poem based on a song daily, it’s a great creative exercise 🙂
Thanks, Talicha! So far, the suggestions have been mostly from the classic rock era, but the next two are from the ’80s, then I have a ’90s, and then I’m fresh out and will have to beg for more. It has been a great exercise so far!
That sounds like a nice mix. I do adore the 80’s 🙂
Not a song I recognise, but I enjoyed the poem.
Aw, I love this! Especially that bicycle that seems to have a mind of its own, and yet, it is the same as the mind of the poet.
I do recognize the name of the song. And I’m fascinated with the bicycle riding on its own. I was also struck by the qualifier at the very end — “all right, for a girl” rather than simply “all right.” Smiles.
I cannot imagine anyone doing it better overall than a girl..in general that IS…
Yeah, not a bad poem for a girl…. 🙂
Girl [if you’ll pardon the term], I like this poem *far* better than I liked the song. Thanks for elevating it.